FF compare Jan/Aug

Hello, I see that you requested critique on both pieces.

First of all, the 2 pieces are great.

Now to the critiques:

•Doom's face and arms are too dark (panel 1) in the Aug piece;
•The smoke in front of The Thing and Invisible Woman (1 panel) is better on the Jan piece (you should try mix the two);
•The Thing in the Jan piece has more depth in his stone skin;
•You should work a little bit more on the background on panel 2 and 3;
•The turbines on panel 1 are barely showing;
•The X emblem on cyclops uniform is too plain, try adding more details.

I hope it helps.

Sincerelly,
-Rafael Gonzaga